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Poetry | 01 Jun 2008

One Word Garments

Waves of circumflexes
storms of adverbs,
windmills of verbs,
shells of signs of ellipsis,
on the island of poems
of soul,
of mind,
of thought
one-word garments
you wear
to endure!

© By Dimitris P. Kraniotis

6 Responses to “One Word Garments”

  1. on 04 Jun 2008 at 10:33 am 1.michele roohani said …

    interesting poem – i didn’t know Kraniotis but you sent me to his site and i liked this poem best:

    Smokes
    of cigarettes
    and mugs
    full of coffee,
    next
    to the fictitious line
    where the eddy
    of words
    leans against
    and nods,
    wounded,
    to my silence.

  2. on 04 Jun 2008 at 4:04 pm 2.sameer said …

    Meaningful

  3. on 16 Jun 2008 at 8:03 pm 3.Harish Thakur said …

    Nice poem creating an image of the pondering mind hurt by…

  4. on 17 Jul 2008 at 4:26 pm 4.Nimesh Dadia said …

    Lao Aju

    Dimitris works somehow reminds me of the French Poet Jacques Prevert. Especially the one that Michelle has quoted. Its incredible.

    THanks

    Nimesh

  5. on 29 Jul 2008 at 10:24 pm 5.Purnima said …

    I agree that one word garments is interesting but, the poem posted by Michele in her comment is minimalistic poetry at its picturesque best. I wish I could write like that.

  6. on 25 Dec 2010 at 10:35 am 6.Sankari Prasad Sarkar said …

    Smoke is synchronous with silence

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